I for one love the lack of talk­ing in the be­gin­ning, Chris; it's more cin­e­mat­ic. On the oth­er hand, the TV and In­ter­net au­di­ence will like­ly share Cin­na­mon's view be­cause of the dif­fer­ence in me­di­a. Any­way, I re­al­ly look for­ward to see­ing the com­plet­ed film.

Hi there...I like the be­gin­ning, but you might short­en the walk­ing se­quence a bit, and have Al­bert talk­ing about what­ev­er's on his mind, where we can hear it ,so we can be more en­gaged in the ex­pe­ri­ence...any­way...hope that helps ya! ;)